The first - upon giving 3-month old J his first swimming experience tonight.
He squirms in delight
As I hold him in the pool
Splashing me with joy.
The second - correct according to Robin's directions:
Autumn leaves, falling
gracefully from the embrace
of Summer, float by.
Tuesday, October 2, 2007
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